Conclusion

Conclusion about my final essay

It is clear that, Technology helps the people to create a new policy in every field. [This sentence provides a link to the previous paragraph and the subject that was discussed on main body].

Sometimes technology makes negative effect in the global world. However, this essay has found that globalization of technology makes the human life comfortable, easy and gives more opportunity to show their own opinion [This sentence refers back to the thesis statement introduction and key ideas].

Above all, this essay has been shown that, Globalization and Technology are hand in hand. Always need to conscious about the bad influence of globalization and technology on the earth and try to makes a strongest globalization of technology in this world. [What I consider as a recommendation].

Day after day technological field is improving more and more, so this essay also hopeful that, in future the global world will more globally than year 2008, by technology.

Paraphrase

Paraphrase

Original:

Of the more than 1000 bicycling deaths each year, three-fourth are caused by head injuries. Half of those killed are school-age children. One study concluded that wearing a bike helmet can reduce the risk of head injury by 85 percent. In an accident, a bike helmet absorbs the shock and cushion the head.

Paraphrase:

In every year the peoples have been effecting over one thousand road accident by bicycle. Head injuries is one of the most caused on that type of suddenly death because, more than seventy five percent peoples have effected by head injuries. Almost fifty percent of student are effecting on this problem. According to research(Smith, 1990) finally suggest that, almost eighty five percent head damage have protected by helmate . helmet try to protect the head from outdanger.

Reference:

Pre-sessional Academic Englisg Course Book, Month 3, Page No: 40

Online Exercise

Exercise on If Clauses

1. If your conditions are competitive, we (Place) will place an order.
2. If I had more time, I (do) would do a course in business English.
3. If we had known more about their culture, negotiating (be) would had been easier. [not ok]
4. If you (customize) customize your CV, your chances of getting a job will be better.
5. We (cancel) will cancel our order if you don't deliver the goods by Friday.
6. If Brittany (speak) spoke better English, she would apply for a job abroad.
7. If you(tell) had told me about the problem, I would have helped you.
8. I (let) will let you know if I weren't satisfied. [not ok]
9. If you execute the order carelessly, they (place/not) will not place another order with you in the future.
10. If I were you, I (worry/not) would not worry about the presentation.

Reference:

http://www.ego4u.com/en/business-english/grammar/conditional-sentences#exercises

Speaking Practice

Speaking Practice

I and two of my friends try to discuss about the Globalization and Information technology. We believe that, globalization and technology go hand in hand. Technology changes the work we do and in nearly all cases, the jobs created by it demand more education and training. It also changes the way business operates by transforming relationships between suppliers, producers, retailers and customers. Yes it is also true that globalization sometimes have affected negatively on financial field but, technology in there have created more new jobs and also many new business policy which have been effecting very positive on finance field. Globalization makes the culture, democracy more change by technology. Now the student can share their own subject easily with others people by internet and also the patient have been getting the online treatment facility by fiber optics.

Listening Practice

Summary

The relationship between China and England are not easy. However, this interconnection has been developing the language exchange and understandings of each country. In 1620, foreign contact with China began through the traders. At this time, the trading was controlled by the government, so it was full of violence and misunderstandings. Although British people tried to learn Chinese to do the effective trade, they were forbidden from learning it because Chinese government protected their languages. After this period, the trading language was developed. It based on Chinese grammar and some essences of English, Portuguese, and Indian. In fact, the first English translation into Chinese was the Bible. Missionaries tried to understand Chinese way of life. After the long history of war, the relationship between China and Western countries were broken, but some Chinese still continued the relationship and keep trading. They came to Britain (sometimes illegally). It is the origin of the people who works and live in Britain now.

Reference: http://www.bbc.co.uk/radio4/reith2008/index.shtml (Lecture: 02)

FRIDAY SELF STUDY

SELF STUDY

1. Write down 4 reasons why you might fail when writing an essay?

ANS:

a) If the sentences are full copies from other writing sources

b) Write down inappropriate information

c) Not use the perfect supporting evidence

d) More grammatical mistakes and not clear the sentence


2. What does ‘brush up’ mean?

ANS:

BRUSH UP: Improve a skill quickly.

For example: She took a two-week course to BRUSH UP her Spanish before her travelling around South and Central America.

3. Is it a good idea to use only internet sources for your research?

ANS: No, Not at all, we can also get much valuable information from Book, article, magazine etc.

4. Which information sources are traditionally used to support academic researches? Where can you find these sources online?

ANS: we need to show the perfect statistical result which are clearly support to your’s opinion or facts.

we can use some researchable website like http://www.eric.ed.gov/, http://research.mla.gov.uk/ . we also can use yahoo and google website.

Intute is also one of the most effective free Web service site for students, teachers, and researchers in higher education .

5. what is a 'spoof website'?

ANS:

Website spoofing is the act of creating a website, as a hoax, with the intention of misleading readers that the website has been created by a different person or organisation.

6). What does it mean to take a 'case-by-case approach to evaluating websites'?

ANS:

Evaluate differentinformations depends on the circumstances, depends on what you need for example, if we are writing an essay we should primary sources area websites.

7). When judging a website, which 3 questions should you ask?

ANS:

Who? Authors , Publishers, Sponcers and Developers.

What? If the material presented is innaccurate, vntrue, illogial or out-of-date then it is unlikely to be a lot of use for serious research.

Where? we will need to establish the location and origin of the information depends on the circumstances.

8. How can you find out more about who wrote the information on the website??

ANS:

We can try to do a quick internet research name, check to see if the author has published anything else...

9. Which URL(Domain Names) are likely to be the most useful for academic research?

ANS:

URL "Uniform Resource Locator" , can give lots of clues about your location within a resource.

10. Which URL(Domain Names) are likely to be the most useful for academic research?

ac, .edu academic or educational servers.co,

.com commercial servers

.gov government servers

.org non-governmental, non-profit making organisations

11. Work through the examples of using your evaluation skills. What 3 things is it important to remember when doing this?

ANS:

When we are doing a research. First , is important to go througth in academic sites where we can find relevant information. Second, evaluate the quality of information that you get. Third, don't use de cut and paste, write with your own words.12.Plagiarism, is what i said before. When you find a information on the internet and just cut and paste in your essay without using your own words.

12) What is plagiarism?

ANS:

Plagiarism, is what i said before. When you find a information on the internet and just cut and paste in your essay without using your own words.

AMPLIFICATION

Failure is the pillar of success

(AMPLIFICATION)

Human life is a serious of battles. We can never win all of them. But we are always anxious for victory. We are never prepared for defeat. As a result whenever defeat comes we get disappointed. Failure often gives us shock. We consider failure curse.

Failure has the other aspect too. Wise people have however, advised use to take both success and failure with the same ease. Failure is very common in this world. It ruins only these who have no power to withstand the troubles of life. But failure cannot dishearten a man of strong will. He knows that after cloud comes fair weather. The way of life is hard and long. Failure is here a guide. Failure makes a man aware of his defects and weakness. Then he starts his work with new energy and finishes it successfully. So, failure paves the road to victory. We gather experience from our failures. History shows that the great man never lost heart when they failed. So, it is true that failure is the pillar of success.